Short Story

Hi, Just wondering if you guys could read my short story Through the Light:

http://www.wattpad.com/story/10143663-through-the-light

Based on a a true story. Luke is fourced to mentor a student younger than him, yet he struggles to cope with his own life, but his dessision leads to better outcomes and a unexpected truth.

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1 reply since 29th November 2013 • Last reply 29th November 2013

Reply #1:

Hey! Sounds interesting. I'll check out your story. Happy But just to let you know, I write really constructive criticism. I'm not trying to sound mean in my review, I just like to analyze the writing a lot.

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