Writing!
What do you think of my new poem? I want constructive criticism that'll help me make it better! Thanks X]
Losing Ground
Every day
Every hour
Every second
Stability slips away,
leaves me in an ocean,
leaves me to drown,
to die,
to sink to the bottom
every minute,
every second,
I am losing ground
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since 8th December 2008
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