once upon a time

i really like the storys ive seen so i decided to try one


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Once upon a time in a land made of only metal there was a young boy name Jack. Jack was known for being a "bad-ass" and had decided to skip school that day. While walking around town he ran into his worst enemy Sam.
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thank you this should be really fun

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2 replies since 5th April 2013 • Last reply 5th April 2013

Reply #1:

Sam was big. Easily 200 pounds, but you don't really notice that because of the thick red scar that ran from his forehead all the way down to his left ear, along with many others of varying lengths, widths and sizes along his neck, chest and arms. He was sitting on the metal bench outside of Stan's, the metal candy shop. Sam was the type of kid who only had one emotion -- disdain. He was sitting on the bench, his long blonde hair swept over one eye, chewing on his lip piercing. So Jack, being the kind of bad ass that he was, strutted over to the bench and challenged Sam to a fight.

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Sam being the tough kid who did not one to back down from a challenge, especially one issued from Jack, jumped up cracking his knuckles threateningly. Jack with his trademark smirk took his stance across from Sam taunting him as he nimbly jumped back and forth. Avoiding Sams huge fists as they swung fiercely at him. Sam managed a lucky punch to Jacks ribs and jack double over like an accordion.

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